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I think something that could use some work is your pinky control- it tends to fly off the fretboard. This is something that we ALL struggle with, but I think if you put in a few minutes every day of working on finger independence, you'll fix that in no time.
But really, your tone is solid and your playing is tight. Keep shredding!