Dead - My Chemical Romance (intro solo up to 80%) *BAD AUDIO*

The speed goes up by 3% each loop up to 80% for 10 minutes.
Was happy how it went but shouldn't have put the phone next to my speaker.
It was easier getting into cause I tried learning it awhile back from a magazine tab.
During my practice the way I was holding the pick was changing for the better.

I've been practicing mostly Scales and CAGED related stuff. Like trying to make sense of things and application.
Sorry for the bad audio, felt like I needed to post a video cause it's been a week or 2.

Is there something with my fret hand wrist movement or index finger that could be done different? I think that's where I could improve some more at the moment. Haven't tried it standing yet.