Are my vocals too processed? Did I sing well?

[Andrew Fernandes]

 

[Filip Tomiša]

It depends on how it sounds with the rest of the track. One thing that you should fix though is that line "Does it seem..." because it sounds weird and it jumps out of nowhere right in your face.

 

[Alicia Willis]

I agree with Filip, I’d have to hear it with the rest of the track.
As it is alone, it does sound a bit too artificial (not sure if that’s the sound you’re going for or not)

 

[Andrew Fernandes]

with background

 

[AGA]

It does sound a bit too processed with the backing track.
As far as your singing, you have a good voice you just need practice.
You have improved since the last time I heard you sing.
Your intonation is fine, it's mostly tension in your high notes.

 

[Andrew Milner]

It sounds a bit processed, but I personally like it. It gives me an 80s sort of vibe and I absolutely love it. Intonation wise I'd say it's good, you have a good voice tone. Try relaxing your throat on high notes though, because your throat tends to close up and your notes will suffer (I do that too when singing and I'm trying to fix it). Don't let go of the diaphragm, just make sure your throat doesn't close up.