Way to go buddy! This solo has a lot of tricky parts in it and you definitely have a good grasp on the concept of it! One thing I noticed though, is that believe it or not your “sloppy” parts are on the slower more melodic parts. The faster stuff you nailed but you seem to have some nerves when performing in front of the camera. I would like to see you keep working on this and uploading it more so so we can see your progress and to work out the nerves of
I think some of your note choices are incorrect, but I feel that’s not really important right now.
I criticize how you play it. You definitely did some cool unique things that aren’t featured in the original solo and that’s what I loved the most about this! Keep working on it. I definitely want to see this progress more. Work on your vibrato, work on your confidence and that will definitely come the more you play! Great work my friend!