Jamming. Quite sloppily.

[Dylan Burley]

Hey all. I was just jamming and thought I would record it. I am thinking about using some of these licks in some of 7HOURS music. What do y’all think? What can I do to some of what I have played in here to make it more accurate. (Besides a metronome) I know what you all were thinking.

 

[Dominik Gräber]

Awesome Jam! I really enjoyed it.
Maybe you could Turn the Volume down a little before Looping the rythm so your Solo Cuts through even better.
Other than that I barely recognized anything sloppy, so my two Cents to your Problem would be don’t be too self critical and Take it slow + practice.
What I mean by Take it slow is Not necessarily playing slower but don’t Rush to be done with this. Take your time until it becomes very easy to Play.

 

[idssdi]

It’s not super sloppy from a technical point of view. Some things I notice is that some parts seem slightly out of place from an harmony point of view. Besides that you seem to really focus on playing fast try to focus a bit more on Melody and your good! And as you say the timing is a bit off at places but generally it is pretty well done!