Nice playing mate, but you can take a little more time to learn each note of the first solo, I would turn down the guitar volume to fit better like the original version, there's no need to have the volume this high once you're playing over the backing track, and for the rhythm parts, its nice you've recorded 2 guitar parts, it sounds much better than a single guitar, but for better results I would try the left - right distribution at 75% for each side, not 100% left or right.