Definitely note the Syn-ness in that intro bit! This is cool and I like it, but I feel like you’ve got a better melody in you somewhere to add here and take this song to the next level. I’ve watched a lot of your playing, and there’s always some crazy note choices or phrasing that screams “I AM SAYONIL, MOTHERFUCKER!” and I kept waiting for that signature bit to show up. So, this is really good, but there’s more of your personality waiting underneath that I hope you’ll explore and bring out to play SOMEWHERE on this track.