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Both are good but I think the second one would be better if it was louder because that one sounds more like an instrumental track while the first one sounds like a GUITAR instrumental track. But most people are gonna choose the first one because we usually percieve as louder=better.
The second one sounds more like the original but in the first one that hammer on and pull off really stand out but I would still go with the second one, or maybe you can do one verse like you did in the second version and the other like you did in the first version. But the overall mix is definitelly better in the second one.