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idssdi

Goodbye(original song)

I wrote this song a little over Month ago and finally felt ready to share it here. Mind you it's just a demo so pretty much everything except the chord progression is subject to change(improve) and yes that also means the lyrics. Some feedback would be very much appreciated and I hope you enjoy!

Don't worry it's not a goodbye to the school or anything, love this place to much for that 😅😅
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Akshat Rawat
I stg this is a HUGE song, hope you enjoy writing the rest of it. The solo at the end really got me, love the bends! At this point, if I were to really think of something, I'd suggest trying to layer another guitar (electric, clean tone) from the part where the last solo picks up and play the same chords but with simple down strums.
 
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Akshat Rawat said:
I stg this is a HUGE song, hope you enjoy writing the rest of it. The solo at the end really got me, love the bends! At this point, if I were to really think of something, I'd suggest trying to layer another guitar (electric, clean tone) from the part where the last solo picks up and play the same chords but with simple down strums.
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Thank you! I tried to make it really just lead and rhythm guitar and nkt add to much things to it for now but maybe I'll go full crazy mf and add parts later 🤣
 
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Ids Schiere said:
Thank you! I tried to make it really just lead and rhythm guitar and nkt add to much things to it for now but maybe I'll go full crazy mf and add parts later 🤣
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haha nothing better than going full crazy mf xD
But yeah, play with it! The rest of the song stays just lead and rhythm, but it has the vocals. Maybe a second rhythm for the ending solo would help spice it up haha
 
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Akshat Rawat said:
haha nothing better than going full crazy mf xD
But yeah, play with it! The rest of the song stays just lead and rhythm, but it has the vocals. Maybe a second rhythm for the ending solo would help spice it up haha
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True, I do like texture guitars anyway so it's definitely a good idea!
 
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Lucrezia
Love it! This song is wonderful, I really enjoyed it and particularly the last solo, it almost gave me chills. Congrats!
 
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