Criticism for my Song? To much/to little distortion on guitars etc.

[Andrew Fernandes]

 

[Andrew Fernandes]

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[Andrew Milner]

Guitars are sounding alright, the only thing I'd change is to make sure the clean notes, in the beginning, are played in a tad more legato fashion. It should add a bit more fluency to the song. The distortion parts are ok, I don't feel there's a need for more distortion.

I'm curious, what did you use for the string parts?

 

[Andrew Fernandes]

Guitars are sounding alright, the only thing I'd change is to make sure the clean notes, in the beginning, are played in a tad more legato fashion. It should add a bit more fluency to the song. The distortion parts are ok, I don't feel there's a need for more distortion.

I'm curious, what did you use for the string parts?

Garageband

 

[Andrew Milner]

Garageband

Nice. It sounds pretty close to the real thing (i.e. actual strings ).

 

[Andrew Fernandes]

Nice. It sounds pretty close to the real thing (i.e. actual strings ).

Sorry meant to say logic pro x they look the same lol, but my other song is real strings

 

[Andrew Milner]

Sorry meant to say logic pro x they look the same lol, but my other song is real strings

Aa, I see. Yeah, either way, it sounds good.