Good verse and Pre chorus?

[Andrew Fernandes]

I cant sing for shit but had someone sing in the background so it helps does it sound good any thoughts?

 

[Andrew Fernandes]

the singing sucks it was just to get lyrics down. I did it in like 10mins. but you can hear the actual melody in the background with the other singer.

 

[Andrew Fernandes]

here is a better sung version of mine

 

[Jak Angelescu]

I’ll check it out tomorrow! I’m sure it’s great!