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Is my riff A7X worthy ?

idssdi

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Sounds pretty cool! I can’t necessarily pick a riff that it reminds me off. If someone else is gonna mention a song I might think hey you’re right but right now I don’the really recognize is as someone else’s song. Are you gonna make a full song out of it?
 

idssdi

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Hahah yeah band are great for songwriting. It gives some angles on the same riff and everyone has different solutions for the same thing so that can create a great dynamic (or fighting)
Yeah sure you can show me the lyrics. Maybe you’really a great poet! And great poets tend to have cool lyrics to read (personally I only wrote lyrics about a crocodile who want to fly faster than a washing machine once)
 

Andrew Fernandes

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Thy Lie
Intro(115)
HOW!
First verse
We had trust in you
where’s it gone
affection in you
what’s it done
We admired you
It felt fun
Is there sense in you
are you dumb?
Interlude
Pre chorus
WHY!
Chorus (inspired by 4am chorus)
It’s a beautiful story,
TURNED UGLY OVERNIGHT
Stupidities glory,
SHOWN IN REVOLTING SIGHT
Believing
Present story
IS A one HELL OF A FIGHT
WAKE UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP
Its a dream
Interlude
Verse
We had trust in you
Got decieved
We had love for you
Didn’t see
Now-all’s lost in greed
Interveen
We evolve from genes
Doesn’t seem.
Verse(outro)
Mistakes are meant to learn (inspired by unholy confessions “nothing will last in this life” part)
Perfections, never firm
Deceptions, made to shock
Ignorance, will not break
It will intend to Fake,
Be careful when you love
or else you’ll find it tough
Chorus
It’s a beautiful story TURNED UGLY OVERNIGHT
Stupidities glory SHOWN IN REVOLTING SIGHT
believing , present story IS A HELL OF A FIGHT
WAKE UP!
This is not what IT SEEMS
The End
Tbh this sounds a bit cheesy lool