Is my riff A7X worthy ?

[Andrew Fernandes]

Do you guys think my riff is good? does it remind you of any other song?

 

[idssdi]

Sounds pretty cool! I can’t necessarily pick a riff that it reminds me off. If someone else is gonna mention a song I might think hey you’re right but right now I don’the really recognize is as someone else’s song. Are you gonna make a full song out of it?

 

[Andrew Fernandes]

@ids yes i want to make a full song but I have no band hahah I need to one get one. I have like 3 riffs altogether.

 

[Andrew Fernandes]

@ids I have lyrics shall show them?

 

[idssdi]

Hahah yeah band are great for songwriting. It gives some angles on the same riff and everyone has different solutions for the same thing so that can create a great dynamic (or fighting)
Yeah sure you can show me the lyrics. Maybe you’really a great poet! And great poets tend to have cool lyrics to read (personally I only wrote lyrics about a crocodile who want to fly faster than a washing machine once)

 

[Noah Berends]

Sounds like a great opening riff to lead into a fast paced pounding verse. But that’s just my take. I love it, I’d love to hear a full song like this.

 

[Andrew Fernandes]

Thy Lie
Intro(115)
HOW!
First verse
We had trust in you
where’s it gone
affection in you
what’s it done
We admired you
It felt fun
Is there sense in you
are you dumb?
Interlude
Pre chorus
WHY!
Chorus (inspired by 4am chorus)
It’s a beautiful story,
TURNED UGLY OVERNIGHT
Stupidities glory,
SHOWN IN REVOLTING SIGHT
Believing
Present story
IS A one HELL OF A FIGHT
WAKE UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP
Its a dream
Interlude
Verse
We had trust in you
Got decieved
We had love for you
Didn’t see
Now-all’s lost in greed
Interveen
We evolve from genes
Doesn’t seem.
Verse(outro)
Mistakes are meant to learn (inspired by unholy confessions “nothing will last in this life” part)
Perfections, never firm
Deceptions, made to shock
Ignorance, will not break
It will intend to Fake,
Be careful when you love
or else you’ll find it tough
Chorus
It’s a beautiful story TURNED UGLY OVERNIGHT
Stupidities glory SHOWN IN REVOLTING SIGHT
believing , present story IS A HELL OF A FIGHT
WAKE UP!
This is not what IT SEEMS
The End
Tbh this sounds a bit cheesy lool

 

[Andrew Fernandes]

@noah yes someone else also said it sounds like intro/ opening riff

 

[Ed Seith]

Cool riff, for sure.

 

[Lauren Morales]

Sounds good, I like it.

 

[Israel Stefanello]

nice riff man congrats!

 

[Daniel Bernard]

It sounds awesome but I just think its a bit slow and the mixing could be a bit better. Great job man

 

[Andrew Fernandes]

@daniel I agree

 

[idssdi]

Yeah the lyrics do sound a bit cheesy but I’m instantly kinda half singing it so good job!

 

[Adin Shepherd]

Sounds good man, just need to tighten up the overlay a little, sounds a bit out of time here and there, otherwise great job!
Is it A7X worthy? Who cares, you are not them, be happy being you!