My first actual written full solo.

[Vasrely Derian]

I wrote a solo for Mr. Bungle’s Retrovertigo. I know, it doesn’t need one because it already sounds awesome it is. But everytime I listen to the song, I have this melody over my head that I just cannot not play.
I know for most of you guys on here, sounds like your regular morning improv. And it is a bit sloppy.
Feedbacks would be appreciated, thank you.

 

[Ed Seith]

I don’t know the song, and it’s REALLY hard to hear the backing track under the lead playing, but it sounds cool (It sounds like there may be a few off notes you linger on, but I can’t tell for sure because of the backing track’s volume). I like that you’ve got bending and vibrato in there – a lot of folks forget that, and the importance can’t be hammered home enough. Nice quick run at the beginning to kick it off, too.

 

[Andrew Fernandes]

I think it sounded quite good like ed said it needs to be heard better, better recorded so we can her it in its full potential.