My first "lesson"!

So I was worried wether I should upload this, because I can not play it perfectly and it is one of the first times ever speaking to the camera.. it’s hard! But I decided to take this step as it is kind of a big one for me. This is the first thing I managed to figure out by ear and the first lesson I give.
So thoughts and opinions are appreciated as well as tips!
First Tutorial: The Day That Never Comes – Live Intro… Third Try?

PS.: Took me three attempts to upload this… I think we really need an option to delete our riffs.

Thanks so much @Ed! Yes it is uncomfortable at first, even more if you are making small mistakes but I’m glad I gave it a try. And I decided not to record the tone over my pc with my fender amp but to take just the camera recording of my Randall KH 15. That thing has just a sweet clean!