Song in the making.

[Dylan Burley]

In the track you are gonna listen to. Its the intro to on of our songs. Would love some feedback. This is about a minute long. It’s repetitive and is not at all how long we are gonna have it. It’s a practice run.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/16NBtkyoTrKcoYc2r50Sbs_WwjP2_Hdim/view?usp=drivesdk

 

[Dan Shipway]

If that is one of the parts I would love to be the one to solo over that because I have a line that I think really fits. Sounds awesome and it is something that I am sure a lot of people here will click and connect with.

 

[Dylan Burley]

@danshipway I mean. That’s the intro and it’s still in the process of making. If you have any ideas for it let me know. I love help on songs. I’m not the best when it comes to writing them. So if you want that line somewhere in a song. Or something like it. Let me know And I’ll figure something out.

 

[Dan Shipway]

It is definitely worth putting in. It is not often that something triggers a lead line instantly but you sir managed to do that! You should definitely start making songs because you seem to have a talent for it.
Ps I would love to help.

 

[Dylan Burley]

Well if you want to help. Then send a video of it and I’ll see what I can do. Either Insta gram or what ever you can send it on

 

[Dan Shipway]

May take me a couple of days as I have been having issues with my recording interface but I will message you as soon as it is working. Hope you don’t mind.

 

[Dylan Burley]

Ok. Take all the time you need bud

 

[Lachlan Hayden]

Great job Dylan, I can really hear the a7X influence in the clip, and this auto correct is so annoying haha

 

[Gabriel Corso]

I like it! I think that it has groove, personality and color.
I think that after that intro you could come with something like a vocal scream to really spice things up and get it goind.
Good job mate!

 

[Jak Angelescu]

THE ONLY thing I think that really should change is the blast beat the drummer does. I was really enjoying the groove and the feel and randomly (at least it felt very random to me) this jarring blast beat comes and throws everything off course. I would suggest to the drummer to try to come up with another fill for that spot, because I personally hear the song kicking it up a couple of notches, getting faster with more energy, and perhaps the blast beats would suit better there.
Other than that, I love it!!