This is a new song I made

[Sayonil Mitra]

I am trying to improve as a composer, learning little things each day. Any feedback/suggestions for improvement is deeply appreciated.

 

[Calvin Phillips]

Love what you got dude. You should add to it! I feel a killer solo coming before the end of the song.

 

[Sayonil Mitra]

Thanks. ok, I will keep it in mind

 

[Jak Angelescu]

I’m so excited to listen to this tomorrow!! And especially glad that you’re writing your own stuff!

 

[Dan Shipway]

That is super cool, I hear a lot of andy james and syn in there.

 

[Sayonil Mitra]

Thanks Dan.
Jak, Excited to hear from you once you listen to it.

 

[Ed Seith]

Definitely note the Syn-ness in that intro bit! This is cool and I like it, but I feel like you’ve got a better melody in you somewhere to add here and take this song to the next level. I’ve watched a lot of your playing, and there’s always some crazy note choices or phrasing that screams “I AM SAYONIL, MOTHERFUCKER!” and I kept waiting for that signature bit to show up. So, this is really good, but there’s more of your personality waiting underneath that I hope you’ll explore and bring out to play SOMEWHERE on this track.

 

[Sayonil Mitra]

My God Ed, I absolutely feel what you are saying. To be honest, I am not sure if I can do this deliberately cuz I never played consciously/thoughtfully. I just played whatever randomly I found. But I should definitely do that. Hopefully, Ed. Hopefully in the next one.
Much Love.