ANDREW!!! WTF!!! You should be proud of this for many reasons! I’m so bummed I’ve missed your growing progress because you are NOT the same guitarist I knew 6 months ago! Your timing, feel, vibrato, clarity and ALL things have improved so much! This was actually very beautiful and well transcribed as an acoustic solo. As far as your concern goes, I think you just need to keep practicing it. You know what you’re doing. I don’t think there’s any tips I could give you. Just keep doing it because this was beautiful! Loved the rain on the lens touch, too!