Would love to hear your thoughts on my demo! :)

[Gareth Davies]

What's up guys? Wanted to hear your thoughts on a demo I'm working on!

To skip the intro to the song, go to around 54 seconds

 

[Gareth Davies]

Would also love to collaborate with a drummer and singer. If you can play/sing, hmu!

 

[MaddoxDelgado]

I realy enjoy the vibe it gives off, with a singer I truly believe this could be a hit. If not its something I would definetly listen to on the regular.

 

[Aaron_Turner]

What's up guys? Wanted to hear your thoughts on a demo I'm working on!

To skip the intro to the song, go to around 54 seconds

Sounds good, I liked the feel at around 4:00, it almost felt elevated. The start of the solo around 4:45 was also pretty good. You said you were looking for a drummer, so I will not comment on the drum beat, which needs work. All in all, good foundation, but I think you just need more bazzaz. Maybe a key change somewhere for a phrase? Also, the whole song felt like the same tempo… maybe have a slower piano intro, and a faster body of the song. The piano intro was cool, so maybe you could do a piano outro… extend the solo and have it fade with the piano playing. Just some ideas. Hope this helps!

 

[Aaron_Turner]

Sounds good, I liked the feel at around 4:00, it almost felt elevated. The start of the solo around 4:45 was also pretty good. You said you were looking for a drummer, so I will not comment on the drum beat, which needs work. All in all, good foundation, but I think you just need more bazzaz. Maybe a key change somewhere for a phrase? Also, the whole song felt like the same tempo… maybe have a slower piano intro, and a faster body of the song. The piano intro was cool, so maybe you could do a piano outro… extend the solo and have it fade with the piano playing. Just some ideas. Hope this helps!

Still probably better than anything I have written though. Respect.

 

[Voss#1]

Awesome man! Maybe a shorter piano intro and like 6 seconds of piano outro. Thanks for sharing!